Free writing with new words (learning vocabulary)

(Please don't judge, give me feedback to improve)

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 It's astonishing to know that Na is not a girl, she is a boy.  Tan, her boyfriend stifled after knowing that she used to be a boy when she was young. Last week, after watching the performance of a conjurer on the street, they came back home and made love. After so many times, he has never been suspected that Na is not a girl, cause everything has been very smoothly. They both have a lucrative career that can help them build a happy family together, and of course, they thought about a wedding. His heart always pound with excitement when they talk about a wedding together. But now, he realizes that everything is just a flaw. Na actually felt it incumbent on her to tell her boyfriend everything, but she was afraid of making him crazy and brake up with her. If they broke up, she has to cope with primitive learning conditions. She dissented from her best friend's advice that she has to tell the truth to Tan.